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Garrett
June 6th, 2005, 23:50
Okay, I'm going out on a limb here:

On occasion, I write crappy poetry which I usually delete soon thereafter. On occasion, I also write short stories, which I normally delete as well. My girlfriend asked me to write something creative for her, so I did. I am actually proud of the result and would like to share it with people.

Constructive criticism is allowed.
red shoe paul
June 7th, 2005, 14:43
wow, a very nice piece of work. a friend of mine writes fiction stories about her favourite show (CSI) and i enjoy reading them as well. keep up the work man, it seems like you have a nice outlook on things. :D
Ghost
June 8th, 2005, 04:32
hey thats the same poem you said you wrote for me over a month ago!

no im kidding, but it was really good. you so romantic. ;)
Dj. dp
June 8th, 2005, 07:40
Hey, Nice poem man, you out did your self right there boy.
Hope to see it in a newspaper or even in a book lol
Andy
June 8th, 2005, 23:59
Okay, I'm going out on a limb here:

On occasion, I write crappy poetry which I usually delete soon thereafter. On occasion, I also write short stories, which I normally delete as well. My girlfriend asked me to write something creative for her, so I did. I am actually proud of the result and would like to share it with people.

Constructive criticism is allowed.

Girlfriend??!! What?! Why was I not informed? lol :P Awesome! Glad to hear it man. As long as you practice your Third Strike you can have all the girlfriends you want.

Andy
Garrett
June 9th, 2005, 18:02
Girlfriend??!! What?! Why was I not informed? lol :P Awesome! Glad to hear it man. As long as you practice your Third Strike you can have all the girlfriends you want.

Andy

Dude, since January. And I thought you knew. And she's a babe. And she's in my shower right now. ;)

And I'm gonna kick your ass someday.
sandy168798
April 28th, 2006, 18:57
Im sandy, Im fat and no one likes me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ishbo
April 29th, 2006, 17:43
Oh man. Yea this thread is pretty old. Oh spam. How we love you so.

Tis is teh lockness. <3